Dark poem ?

oasis live
pimp my pimple asked:

You know there’s something missing
In my life
The beggar said to the prince?
I’ve got a hole in my shoes
To let the water in ?
trade-in, kingpin
While you live in your palace
With servants & next of kin
Drinking, laughing, rolling
About drinking tequila & gin
You know there’s something missing
In my life
The beggar said to the frog ?
Searching looks on the skyline
You know you can
Go back to your pond
& swim
Leap frog & dwell
While I live
Without shelter a living hell
Living razors fine line
Bushes America has come
Crashing in ?
Dumbbell
Farewell. Bluebell, Michelle
Missing pieces
Left on the shore
Choked by some smoke
Eyeshore, downpour,
Broke in a desert
No oasis
Rain don’t come
Further down a dirt road
A beach with no treasure
Winter, wrestler, shiver
Shrapnel, farewell
Wearing a stained raincoat






4 Responses to 'Dark poem ?'

  1. Aiden B - August 16th, 2010 at 2:07 pm

    i love poetry like that i must say that’s a great poem =)

  2. FireAngel - August 17th, 2010 at 4:31 am

    i don’t like it although i love dark poetry…

  3. poetrysamateur.wordpress.com - August 17th, 2010 at 3:52 pm

    I like that poem a lot WELL DONE!

    My favourite line is “About drinking tequila & gin”

    cool.

  4. chandrama pyakurail - August 17th, 2010 at 7:37 pm

    very nice .i really like it.we know you are agood poem writer


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